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Testimonials

We work closely with a small number of students each year, helping them find their voice, tell meaningful stories, and apply with confidence. Here's what some of our students have shared about the experience.

"I was terrified of the essay-writing portion of college applications, but Sophia and Daniel not only simplified the process, but also helped me become a more confident writer in everything including personal essays, lab reports, and application writing. They helped me be more concise with my writing and find ways to subtly showcase my accomplishments while still making my personality shine through. Most importantly, they inspired me to stay true to myself and my values in all my endeavors, and ask important questions to constantly clarify my writing and ideas. I am forever grateful for their guidance and compassion."

– Biochemistry Major

"Thank you for teaching me so much throughout high school. When I first entered ninth grade, I really wanted to pursue the STEM fields and always felt like the humanities were not as interesting. But seeing writing through a different lens, being able to express myself through my essays, and most importantly, reflecting back on the experiences that really shape me into who I am today, draw me to this creative art. I'm so grateful that I got the chance to work with you, and also learn so many lessons and life advice. I'm not sure where I would be today without our weekly meetings, and the extra lessons we always had before deadlines, trying to cram in as much work as possible. I've seen myself grow throughout the past few years and will be forever thankful for your help. Sophia and Daniel have been my most impactful mentors. They emphasize a student- centric approach to teaching and are deeply invested in developing a mentor relationship instead of pure instruction. From my first meeting, I immediately connected with them over a wide array of topics. Like myself, they both had extensive training in the arts; when I mentioned my interest in the engineering fields, they offered me personal experiences and insights into how I could synthesize computer programming and music. Sophia and Daniel have a vibrant educational background across different disciplines and emulate intellectual vitality and curiosity. As a student, I saw them as a role model and their qualities were highly contagious and critical for my personal growth. My ability to write effectively, persuasively, and succinctly greatly improved under the guidance of Sophia and Daniel. They provided me helpful exercises that prompted me to draw on the techniques of others and realize my own strengths and weaknesses. They were supportive of every project I pursued, from submitting my writing to New York Times competitions, to applying for summer programs and college, to simply drafting a piece of creative writing for myself. Through all this, they most importantly preserved my personal voice in my writing. My pieces always communicated my own intentions, while we collaborated to clarify and perfect sentence phrasing and essay structure. To this day, I ask Sophia and Daniel for their advice. From internships and career paths to chatting about recent events in our lives, they remain my trusted mentor and friend. I’ve learned that writing is a life-long journey, both enjoyable and rewarding if given the right resources and teaching. Sophia and Daniel have transformed my writing, research, interpersonal skills, and way of thinking—and these lessons have carried on into college, the workplace, and beyond."

– Engineering and Business Major

"Looking back on our work, I honestly can’t thank you enough. Of all the people who supported me during the application process, you two stood out for how deeply you listened and how thoughtfully you helped me shape my story. You never tried to put me into a box. Instead, you helped me embrace the intersections of my personal life and achievements in a way that felt authentic. I’ve grown so much just from our conversations, and the way you approached the process made it feel less like a performance and more like a real expression of who I am. Moreover, I think our sessions helped me develop a new approach in writing essays, connecting all the dots together, building a REAL story and each sentence serving a purpose."

– Computer Science Major

"Sophia and Daniel's support through my college application process ultimately helped me secure a spot at my top choice college. I am deeply grateful for both of their hard work, support, and flexibility to work with me through my senior year. Their attention to detail and commitment to helping me learn more about myself as a college applicant, person, and writer is invaluable as I transition into applying for jobs, scholarships, and more. Cutting fluff words to match seemingly impossible word limits, presenting myself in an interesting and artistic manner, and creating flowing essays are just a few key takeaways from my time with them. Sophia and Daniel's mentorship also helped me express the ideas I had onto paper. I had been stuck for months trying to write about myself before beginning their program. From minimal word changes to adjust tone to larger paragraph planning, each step in crafting my essays was thanks to Sophia and Daniel."

– Government and Legal Studies Major

"You guys inspired me to volunteer with a mentoring organization. I can’t take credit for my kids’ accomplishments, but they’re all going to amazing schools they’re truly passionate about! One of them was even awarded the Gates Scholarship! I also try my best to continue teaching as a peer tutor and lab TA and it’s some of the most fulfilling work that I do at school :) Thank you for encouraging me to continue with what I enjoy, even if it’s not necessarily career driven."

– Food Science Major

"Sophia and Daniel were incredibly helpful throughout the college application process, assisting with essay development and teaching me the writing style required for college admissions. Sophia's ideas were extremely creative and helpful, while Daniel's attention to detail ensured my writing was polished and impactful. They are both amazing people who are very dedicated to ensuring their students are confident in their writing, from guiding me through revisions of essays I was unhappy with to generously dedicating time outside of our sessions to refine my work. I am incredibly grateful for their guidance, attention, and care throughout this process!"

– Finance Major

"Sophia and Daniel are very knowledgeable and approachable. They truly understand the unique background and interests of their students and the admission process. Their assistance was indispensable in helping me pursue my goals in college admissions."

– Computer Science Major

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